The first thing that hit me was how vague the reference is to "Garden Recovery...Edibles..."etc. I would use terminology more recognizable to a typical homeowner, such as
*Garden Makeovers
*Garden Maintenance
*Container Gardens
*Edible Gardens
...And More!

"We Use 100% Organic Products & Methods" might be a small slogan at the bottom.

I agree with Cady about getting more specific with your bullet points. "Makeovers" is a good buzz word right now, thanks to HGTV.

Love your lead-in line.

What font will you use? This can be very important. Papyrus is a little over-used these days, but I bet it would be eye-catching and it has the kind of feel I think you're looking for.

I'm using "Fantasy" as my font. The Garden Gypsy fills up over 1/4 of the ad. I used the printmaster program and stretched and arched my Logo, so it's very prominent.
I just went to my program to look up -papyrus-, I didn't see it. Is that a MS Word/office font? I chose this one out of the printmaster selection, so they may be named differently.

My reasoning behind simplifying the *bullets, was I thought it would be too repetitive to say Garden... since it is in my company name. Does that make sense?

I went and set up my 6 month contract w/ the paper today. I'm so excited! This all starting to come together!

Snow, snow, go away...

I don't know if Papyrus is an MS font or not. Came preloaded on my Mac. What you already have sounds good to me!

I kinda like repeating the word "garden" in the bullet points. That's what it's all about, ain't it?

Enjoy the snow and the down time. I have a feeling you're going to be a very busy gardener come spring.

Congratulations on everything coming together.

Oh yeah, one more suggestion- unless you already do this, start working out to build your stamina, strength and flexibility for when the season starts so that you can hit the ground running. Or weeding. Or planting. Or whatever, without too many aches and pains.

Best of luck!

Excellent point, GB. Even though I work year round at a nursery and garden through winter whenever I can, the start of each new season leaves me exhausted. This week I helped to unload several large semis full of plants, schlepped around dozens of tables to set up the perennial department for the season and today loaded and unloaded and hauled up a good set of front steps 7 large pots for a container planting grouping for a client. I'm in pretty good shape, but right now I feel every moment of my rapidly advancing years :-))

I have had very, very good luck w/two strategies...a demographic direct mail postcard and an ad in the local paper in May and September. Last year I mailed my postcards too early, this year they'll drop the first week in April. People don't really think about their gardens until it's warmer outside. The first nice day is when they want you...I also placed extra postcards at an upscale garden center that doesn't do design and that was also fruitful. Best of luck!